Lady Sydney

I really liked this! It provides excellent imagery and you have a smoothe flow that keeps your readers wanting more. (hint hint, nudge nudge. lol) Looking forward to the rest ...

Yeah, that's really hard to see. From what I can see, your weapons don't really... amaze me. Honestly not trying to be mean here. But, they don't. Not saying that ...

I liked them both. They seem kinda witty to me. ^_^ I agree that if we talk more, others wouldn't listen, and your poem showed that even without you explaining ...

This was good. Though, I was confused about your rhythm; some of it seemed kind of off. :? The last two lines, for instance. Otherwise, I found this to be ...

Easily, the first one is my favorite! It's so beautiful. The first thing that came to mind when I saw that was the "Kay Jewelers" commercial. "Every kiss begins with ...

I love her wings! ^_^ Nice pose too... and umm... butt. :? lol Everyone's already touched the "arm" problem, but I have my own opinion about something that could be ...

That's so cool! :shock: I could so see that as some kind of poster. Lol Very nice! ^_^ ~*Syd*~

Well, here's my first of many pictures. Sorry if it's a little fuzzy! My webcam is being annoying. I'll have clearer ones once I translate the manual for my new ...

That was wonderful. ^_^ I loved it all. I'm not the best person to give a critique on poetry, but I found this easy to follow and enjoyable to read. ...

Hey, gothgiril01. Well, unfortunately... I'm going to have to agree with Ayra. You didn't grasp my attention and make me want to read more. I stopped about halfway through. You ...

Lol. Aww, that's cute! ^_^ Congrats to Mr. and Mrs. Oink! Nice idea, Matt. ~*Syd*~

Wow. You've got some amazing talent! It would be better had there been a little color somewhere on the page (either in the sword or in the background) just to ...

That was so sweet! But, I'm a helpless romantic, so I think everything's sweet. :roll: lol Really, though, he did a great job with this. I can tell how much ...

Welcome all! ^_^ So glad to have you here with us. Nice to meet you! ~*Sydney*~

Ah, very nice. I liked it! :D I have a thing for the Victorian ages, so if you ever continue, I'd like to know. ^_^ There was nothing really wrong ...